The Swan and the Tinkerer (fantasy/fairytale)

 

I am working on a series of fairytales; this is one that I have done already. It has not been edited so any feedback would be welcomed.


The Swan and the Tinkerer

 

            Once there was a tinkerer, and though his shop was small, he was known the kingdom over for his beautifully delicate metal work and magical workings of his devices. He had even created a dancing music box for the princess; it did not just spin in a circle to the tune but moved as if alive. His gears were smaller than any other tinkerer of master skill, and his metal work was so thin its weight did not match its materials. The tinkerer had a daughter who was his entire world outside his work, but the poor dear was born with so many melodies of bad health she could neither walk nor did she have hopes to become a woman. He called her his Swan.

            Swan’s only world was her small bedroom which her father attempted to make as pleasing as any park, but it is hard to forget one is unable to leave no matter the beauty around. Her favorite thing was the oversized window her father had put in giving her a wonderful view of the swan lake. She knew joy in the frolicking of the swans, but just as intensely she felt the sorrow of their absence during the winter.

            It was during one of those winters her health grew worse than any before and the tinkerer was in fear that he would lose his swan.

            He called in the most of famed men of religion, but they only stood over her and prayed with shaking heads. “We are sorry, but she will be with her creator soon.” This did nothing to comfort the tinkerer.

            He called in the greatest men of learning, doctors fit for the king himself, but they too only poked and prodded with shaking heads. “We are sorry, but her body is beyond repair.”

            He called in the witches, women with knowledge of nature, but they too only burned their herbs and shook their heads. “We are sorry, but the mother earth calls her back to her womb.”

            But I am a tinkerer, her father told himself. I make and fix things. It is upon me to fix my Swan. He took on no new work but instead set to creating the most beautiful life-sized swan. His blood from small cuts from the hair-thin hammered metal infused with his swan. His tears fell upon the gears as he fit their tiny teeth in line. His prayers for his daughter’s life instructed the mechanical swan to be her savior. Every ounce of his love was used to create the most beautiful swan for his Swan. If he could not save her, he wanted her to have her own swan instead of those far down in the lake.

            On the first day of spring the swans returned to the lake and the tinkerer turned his daughter to see. A small smile crossed her face, but they did little more to return any health to the child. The tinkerer kissed his daughter on the cheek and whispered, “I have a gift for you, my Swan.” He rolled the frail child to face into the room where the beautiful metallic swan sat; its majestic wings folded around itself. The smile brightened with the love in her heart for the gift her father brought. “Let me wind her up so you can see how beautiful she is.”

            The tinker squatted down to the swan and turned its key around and round. The sound of springs coiling tight and gears fitting together covered the sound of his daughter’s last breath. When the tinker pulled the key free and stood the swan unfurled its wings as graceful as any of the swans on the lake. Tears rolled down his cheeks as he watched the swan furl and unfurl its wings four more times, the limit of its eternal mechanics. He turned to see his daughter’s smile, but he instantly knew she was gone. Collapsing onto the bed he holds her; tears escape his eyes and gasps of sorrow his lips.

            Hours passed but he could not let go of his Swan. Then the metallic sound behind him wakes him from his mourning. “Impossible,” he gasps. The swan unfurls its wings and moves around the room. The tinker’s hand pats his vest’s pocket and feels the key remains where he placed it. He gently laid his daughter back to her pillow and kneels in front of his creation. Its eyes, of which he did not give the swan, shown back at him with life, and he knew this was his Swan.

            The tinkerer took his Swan to the lake knowing this would be her biggest joy. She swam around the lake which he did not create the swan to do. Every day he visited his daughter and would tell her of his day, what devices he is making, and how she was the talk of the village, his mechanical swan more realistic than any other tinkerer has ever created. She was happy. No prison bed to hold her but her own lake. She got her wish, and her father gave it to her.

            Then one day her father did not come.

            The Swan spent her days swimming circles unsure why he never visited anymore, but also sorrowful knowing he must be no more.

            Years passed. The lake was made a park. They called it Tinkerer’s Pond but other than the old no one remembered why since its main attraction was the mechanical swan that swam there. As decades passed the Swan slowed and lost its shine, but she never once forgot her father or the sorrow of losing him.

            Then the last spring sprung, and the last gear turned, and the swan could no longer hold Swan. She looked up to see her father standing on the shore and he motioned her to him. She walked to him, and he took her hand in his. “It is time to go home my Swan.”

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